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Poetess312
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Date Posted:30-05-2013 09:42Copy HTML


Picture: Ghost train by ~karola-j. ©2010-2013 ~karola-j.

THE NIGHTMARE TRAIN.

Silently, I watch
As clouds pass by
In painted dreams
Of black and white.


Silently, I watch

As darkness descends
Upon the embers
Of the dying day.


Silently, I watch

As unseen dreams
Dance across the shadows
Of a storm-kissed night.

Silently, I watch
As distant winds
Play upon the trees
And soft leaves dance
Upon twilight dreams.

Silently, I watch
As sightless eyes
Burn my soul,
Filling the night
With silent screams
As memories sail
Upon stormy seas.

Silently, I watch
As nightmares pass
Upon the tracks
Of eternal night.

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Re:The Nightmare Train

Date Posted:30-05-2013 10:46Copy HTML

A powerful piece, Lynn, dark and eerie, but so strong in it's darkness,

it brought mind Chris de Burgh singing Spanish Train, though it's a little darker even
but great feeling in this (though it's slipping down the Today page at great speedsmiley7)

Zy x smiley6smiley6


  
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