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Date Posted:11-11-2014 07:22Copy HTML 30 years30 years is a lifetime,a time of years swimming, singing laughing, oh yes I have laughed, have you? What a silly question of course you have watching me being silly. I don't know if I have missed you, always sometimes ~ but is it just retrospective. Ok, yes I have I am a curmudgeonly person, I have missed you I've missed our young skin and staying up all night, I've missed not going to the club and jamming and missing notes and leaving rings on a piano top and I have missed it all. So I just wanted to say I have missed it the fun, being young being silly, having sex falling in a laundry basket, wearing a stupid basque that cut and you laughed and I damn well did too. 30 years, fuck, where did it go? |
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potleek | Share to: #1 |
Re:30 Years Date Posted:11-11-2014 08:47Copy HTML Emma we can all look in a mirror and smile as those thoughts and memories run through our heads.
Aah where have all those years gone. Gone they have and we can't ever get them back, but we have the memories for a while longer...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha | Share to: #2 |
Re:30 Years Date Posted:13-11-2014 12:45Copy HTML I read this earlier, Emma, and had to give up before getting to respond,
but much enjoyed this retrospective little rant/ponder, lol, and smiled at your closure... 30 years ago I was still more than half my present age so looking back takes a while, lol, but how worth the memories all those years have been...and the ones before, Zy x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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dizzycrone | Share to: #3 |
Re:30 Years Date Posted:13-11-2014 11:16Copy HTML
Emma I ask myself the same question all the time, 30 years ago I had a more youthful mind and body... I look in the mirror now and wonder what the F*&K happened.. I love this one because all the way through I was nodding my head in agreement with your words.. its brilliant Vicki x don't knock on deaths door.. just ring the bell and run like hell!!
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Deezee43 | Share to: #4 |
Re:30 Years Date Posted:14-11-2014 11:24Copy HTML Hi Emma,
unfortunately, the memory is not as clear as it used to be for me, haha, wait for the next 30 years and see what I mean But I did enjoy reading this, like Vicki, I smiled and nodded in a few places and like Les, echo your closure's sentiments and it passes even quicker with age, David Could do with a glass of rosé!
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