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Zydha
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Date Posted:21-12-2015 09:41Copy HTML

(I found this in an untitled word document and don't know if I've ever posted it or even it's title)

She walked the streets after dark, “How else to make a living” she thought as she looked towards the slowly oncoming car. Sometimes she got lucky and would stack her price according to the make of the car nomatter who was driving it.

 

The car pulled up and she stepped off the sidewalk, it was a Bugatti so immediately she added  another fifty bucks to the price of what he asked for “Why not?” she said to herself “It’s always worth a try” and as he nodded his head and leant over to throw the door open on her side, she saw that he wasn’t too bad a looker, nor too old.

 

He had asked for the night, starting with dinner first and she hadn’t had a good meal for days. Mostly she was too tired to eat when she got home to her own bed and when at work, she used the nearby hamburger stand as most of the girls did.

 

Once in the car, she asked where they were going and he simply replied “Home”

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Re:A First Time for Everything (Late Sunday Repost)

Date Posted:22-12-2015 09:52Copy HTML

Zy! Ah yes you have posted this before but I couldn't remember the finish, so it was worth reading this all over again.
I really did enjoy it, different yes, kinda gives that warm feeling to know everything turned out just right...Tony (potleek)
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Re:A First Time for Everything (Late Sunday Repost)

Date Posted:23-12-2015 01:01Copy HTML

Thanks, Tony, I have so much in files and folders and in my Story folder.....

I have a total of 19 Word documents with 'untitled' stories which I have started, finished
and then posted with an 'instant' title on the corner (I think) one day I'll check them out, smiley8

glad you liked, thanks again, Zy

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