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potleek
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Date Posted:20-08-2020 01:39Copy HTML


A Nod of recognition

 

A little old Chinese man

Died on his sampan last night

We didn’t know him or he us

He died with dignity and without any fuss

 

Some will not give a second thought

Or even take time to bother.

But in the long line of people

To us, he was still a brother

 

He wasn’t so different from all of us

Going about each chore without too much fuss

Doing the best that he can

To try to better things for his family clan

 

But now he is sadly gone

Perhaps he will be missed by more than one

Just in case there is no one to note his passing

 Least we can give him is a nod of recognition

 

 

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Re:A Nod of Recognition

Date Posted:24-08-2020 04:17Copy HTML


An evocative write, Tony, giving thought to the man or simply those we have not met nor ever will, 

but in the scheme of things...are in fact related by the simple understanding of human nature.


Sorry it has taken a little time to come in to this, but have had a busy time with appt.s etc

and they seem to absorb  much of the weeks free time for all of us.... good work, Tony, Zy




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Date Posted:24-08-2020 07:50Copy HTML

Zy when you're not about I know there more important things going on. But thanks for reading and commenting, this one is a thought that's passed through my mind a few times, but never quite got to write it down till now. Sadly so many people pass through this world without the recognition they deserve for the service they've put in to daily living, yet effects many around them...Tony (potleek)
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Re:A Nod of Recognition

Date Posted:25-08-2020 03:10Copy HTML

Hi Tony,


I have to agree with Les' reply to this poem. We all have a life to live, often differing greatly, of course, but all are valid and important to that individual, even though we may know nothing of that person's life or the trials thereof. 

It's a good thought to give that "nod of recognition", Tony,


David

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