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Druid_girl | |
Date Posted:28-08-2015 01:08Copy HTML Lil was Tommy's mother. She was in turmoil. She knew Tommy's dad had gone underground, doing covert work for "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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Zydha | Share to: #1 |
Re:Beginning of a Better Time-Chapter two Date Posted:28-08-2015 10:13Copy HTML I am liking this, Maria, it's deepening and grabbing attention,
where had McCade been? why is he hanging around now? will he make himself known to Tommy? Roll on Chapter 3!!! Well done, Mrs, Zy x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Druid_girl | Share to: #2 |
Re:Beginning of a Better Time-Chapter two Date Posted:29-08-2015 03:04Copy HTML So happy to see you are enjoying my little tale. I hope I can find something gripping to take you on your way through a journey into my mysterious realm. So glad you are enjoying it. I will continue writing as long as the muse allows.
Thanks for reading and the compliment. I love telling stories, as you can see. Mariaxx "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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potleek | Share to: #3 |
Re:Beginning of a Better Time-Chapter two Date Posted:29-08-2015 09:03Copy HTML Maria not to spoil anything, but I had a funny feeling as to the identity of the man in the park, but this is getting very intrigueing.
Looking forward to the next chapter...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Druid_girl | Share to: #4 |
Re:Beginning of a Better Time-Chapter two Date Posted:29-08-2015 10:10Copy HTML It came to me after I watched a documentary of Navy Seals and how tough they were. They were a deadly force.
So I have been smitten by the sheer force of the warriors. They got started years ago, they travel in small groups and always got their target. Thanks for your read and review. Glad you are interested in my story. Thanks Tony. Mariaxx "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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mikhail44 | Share to: #5 |
Re:Beginning of a Better Time-Chapter two Date Posted:30-08-2015 04:11Copy HTML most well done Maria - makes one wish for more!
best, m |
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Druid_girl | Share to: #6 |
Re:Beginning of a Better Time-Chapter two Date Posted:30-08-2015 06:23Copy HTML thank you Mikhail, I am glad you like my tale about a man who lives by the sword. His wife and son is left behind to miss his presence. The absent father who is deeply needed.
Maria "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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