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Zydha
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Date Posted:05-06-2015 04:02Copy HTML

 She was everything every girl ever wanted to be,

successful and rich, living in a beachfront hut

with smaller proportions than one would expect,

but she lived alone, unknown, to her neighbours;

 

She flew solo, the beauty of the bay,

spent her hours by herself, every single day

except for her birthday, then was her delight

she would throw a party, lasting all the night.

 

Music, candles, vans with booze

guests were many, but one she’d loose

When all went home to along the way

Except the last, she’d persuade to stay.

 

Romance flared and her nostrils too

To late - he remembered, what to do,

He’d thought to woo then make his wife

But, her teeth bit deep, as he gave his life.

 

Noone ever knew, how old she really was

But sensed the local young men fed her lifelong cause,

So when the invitations come, everybody knows

Go, but don’t be last to leave, when her lifeline, grows;

 

© Zy 2015

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Re:Birthday Treats (Lynn's Challenge)

Date Posted:06-06-2015 12:47Copy HTML

I seem to have been saying this a lot lately, Zy, but...
I'm glad I didn't read this one before bed! A dark write indeed!
This would be perfect for Halloween!

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Re:Birthday Treats (Lynn's Challenge)

Date Posted:06-06-2015 10:11Copy HTML

ah hah, I didn't want it to be too gory, Lynn, not in our ethereal and fairy section,

but you set the yardstick, lol, smiley8 just kept to the theme, Zy x

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Re:Birthday Treats (Lynn's Challenge)

Date Posted:06-06-2015 10:26Copy HTML

So I did, Zy, so I did...
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