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Zydha
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Date Posted：15-08-2014 11:11Copy HTML Day Dreaming Nightmare Those moments are precious, when a clear head can think, can rememberall the pleasant happenings of the day now over and enjoy the playground of day dreaming. Mmnnn... I felt your hand gently massage my back and I leant forward, stretching my hands down to my toes. The sensitivity of your touch tingled, just a little, but reached within the way lovers can do. First one hand, then the second joined in this sensual foreplay, exploring the nape of my neck with electric fingertips, your palms cupped over the curves of my shoulders, whispering by their motion that they were on a journey of adventure and I was to be your undiscovered frontier. I slipped backwards, letting the warm comforting sea of concealing bubbles reach where you had just been given scope to venture horizons new, to explore the privacy of me, but instead, you chose to return to my shoulders, once again softly draping your fingers around my neck...then your hands enclosed me with a grip which flickered my first sense of alarm, too much force, no more the promise of moments to come, the once tender massage had become aggressively threatening! https://image.aimoo.com/ForumImages/fd4136ae-2b3b-4d4b-8222-9d9363e75a6f/140816_070840_70651463.doc Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Druid_girl
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：16-08-2014 12:13Copy HTML Yowie, I was beginning to think you were a goner...good thing it was a dream after all. Great story telling and emotions that followed.
Mariaxx "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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potleek
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：17-08-2014 04:37Copy HTML Zy...Ha! I wasn't expecting that, well done.
I first thought that the person had fallen asleep in the bath...Wrong. And was slipping down and was about to drown, there you go now, surprise, surprise...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：17-08-2014 10:25Copy HTML heehee, the opening bit got you, did it, Tony, and led you along...all by design,
 I'm pleased I can still surprise you after all this time, lol, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Zydha
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：06-09-2014 12:52Copy HTML Thanks, Maria, good to know I can still surprise you two with
an unexpected ending, lol, glad you enjoyed, a mischevious write, Zy xOpposites exist by virtue of each other
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Deezee43
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：07-09-2014 10:06Copy HTML Hi, Les,
you got me too and since we only have an Italian walk in shower here in France, this is a great show if imaginative writing, (but I could think about putting the bath back, haha) David Could do with a glass of rosé!
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Zydha
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：08-09-2014 11:08Copy HTML Don't you even think it, Hart, I love my bigger walk around bathroom and shower,
or I won't write any more 'naughtier' stories but thanks for reading, Tony and I are trying to tempt others in here to read, Les x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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potleek
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：09-09-2014 08:05Copy HTML Zy
 I had forgot all about this story even though I had already commented.I still didn't see the end coming...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Miss_Bubble
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：06-06-2015 06:35Copy HTML Well, you've just tempted me in, Zy! Here I am, sitting here with a cup of coffee...
... and I nearly dropped it!!!  Gripping stuff!  Stand tall in the face of adversity
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Zydha
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：13-11-2015 12:14Copy HTML I was pleased to read you didn't see the end coming with this one, Tony, thanks,
you probably find as I did, the story comes to mind in a flow so when reading back it's harder to tell if the ending is already ... megaphoned cos we are already familiar with it, ZyOpposites exist by virtue of each other
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Zydha
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：13-11-2015 12:17Copy HTML hahaha...yes, Tony and I would love to see this short story section livened up, Lynn,
so the odd surprise ending might keep your interest to pop in more, thanks for the reccie, Zy xOpposites exist by virtue of each other
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Zydha
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：21-01-2019 04:18Copy HTML I'm just bringing this one up to the top again cos it seemed so popular when I posted it, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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potleek
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：21-01-2019 09:39Copy HTML Zy having read this back in 2014 I kind of recognised that I had read it but the ending completely evaded me. So once again surprise, surprise didn't see it coming, well done you...Tony (potleek) |
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Zydha
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：22-01-2019 01:52Copy HTML
Heehee....popular it was, Tony, but impossible it wasn't, I was only born in 1945 Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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potleek
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Re：Daydreaming Nightmare Date Posted：22-01-2019 02:52Copy HTML Zy I wondered why you had put your year of birth down. Hey everybody loves a smart alec...lol As you may see I have corrected it...Thanks...Tony (potleek) |
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