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potleek
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Date Posted:11-10-2020 07:30Copy HTML


CHANGE

 

It’s no good sitting and wondering why

Perhaps it’s enough to make you cry

But the thought isn’t that strange

Yes! There is much we would like to change

 

Most of us manage the best we can

We follow rules and the follies of man

But we are not in command

Do we really have the right to demand?

 

No matter where there is a real need

Underlying there will be some kind of greed

Penny pinching just to save a buck

Do we owe to life what we call just luck

 

In life there is always doubt

At the flick of a switch it can be snuffed out

At the thoughtless stroke of a pen

It all happens again and again

 

For a single life, today what is it worth

Is it because there are too many of us on this earth

Have we lost the ability to share?

For our neighbour do we no longer care

 

Has everything to be put down to cost

In this is the future of man lost

Can we save a heart ache or a single tear?

Let’s get back to us what means so dear.

 

 

 

 


Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Re:Deezee's Challenge: Change (repost)

Date Posted:12-10-2020 12:33Copy HTML

Nice one, Tony, so true.....en masse change is indeed difficult, but one step at a time gives freedom to the individual to at least try.

There is a good lesson for all within, keep it simple, be true to you, all the world and its follies are just too much, you have used words of wisdom, Tony, but to change...one must know for what, 

Zy


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Re:Deezee's Challenge: Change (repost)

Date Posted:12-10-2020 07:36Copy HTML

Zy thanks for reading and commenting, to be honest I thought I had nothing about change in my files. Just happened to come across this one tucked away, it's perhaps not quite what David suggested for the challenge, but still it's about change...Tony (potleek)
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Re:Deezee's Challenge: Change (repost)

Date Posted:18-10-2020 03:11Copy HTML


David kind of views the challenge much as I do, Tony,

having come up with a suggestion, itis up th others as to their interpretation.


I enjoyed this and found it very much in keeping, nice one, zy


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