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Druid_girl
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Date Posted:01-05-2015 08:41Copy HTML


Could it be true
That I am eschew
Broken, fractured
To unfold
Diamond in the raw
They say that I'm
Only to produce
And be a slave to my spouse
I shall be a diamond someday
Not a chunk of stone
Unlike 'him" with feet of clay
I am broken, now
I shall grow, day by day
I am diamond in the raw
Watch me sparkle
I've only begun to shine.
Maria

"Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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Re:Diamond in the Raw

Date Posted:02-05-2015 03:22Copy HTML


Maria...

What great scripting to further illustrate the illustration you found. It does speak to the roll of some women in their lives. I am glad that it is not across the board. I have my issues but it is different than what you write here. However, I do know lots of women for whom this scenario is reality in one degree or another.

Good job
Blessings from Corinne

"Give thanks for unknown blessings already on their way."....Native American Saying
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Date Posted:02-05-2015 06:09Copy HTML

Thank you Corinne, I was showing another facet to my thoughts on equality and what a person can become.
Your response was ever so kind.
Fractured am I, true colors shines from within.

Mariaxx

"Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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