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potleek
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Date Posted：21-01-2019 01:25Copy HTML
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha
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Re：Dick home from the pub (short story) Date Posted：22-01-2019 08:25Copy HTML I certainly did not see that coming, Tony, and it is such a short script to carry the developing tale...very much enjoyed, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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potleek
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Re：Dick home from the pub (short story) Date Posted：23-01-2019 07:12Copy HTML Zy thanks for reading, sometimes less is better. Just like breathing, in and out.
But I suppose I could have made it longer by starting with his capture...Perhaps, you never know...Tony (potleek)
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Zydha
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Re：Dick home from the pub (short story) Date Posted：23-01-2019 09:10Copy HTML
I don't think there is a need to make this one any longer, Tony, it succinctly tells the tale... if anything which might help presentation would be to break it up a bit, as it looks condensed. I thought it a really good read, just a little tight in its layout??? Maybe, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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sachasuzanne27
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Re：Dick home from the pub (short story) Date Posted：24-01-2019 09:16Copy HTML I love this Tony, fantastic, held off right til the end :)
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mikhail44
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Re：Dick home from the pub (short story) Date Posted：24-01-2019 09:21Copy HTML very well done Tony - thanks for sharing
enjoyed very much
best,
m
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potleek
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Re：Dick home from the pub (short story) Date Posted：24-01-2019 10:01Copy HTML Mikhail many thanks for reading. Now I didn't think you ventured towards stories.
Now if you have a few hours to spare (whenever) you'll find a multitude of good reading in both story sections.
Now if Zy sees this reply no doubt she will tell you the same.
Now don't you ever tell me that you don't have a story or two that we would be over the moon to read...Tony (potleek)
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