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potleek
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Date Posted：08-11-2015 12:04Copy HTML From out of the mouth of babes Janice was a single mother with a baby almost one year old and together they had just moved into a new furnished home, it wasn’t large by any means but enough for her to get back on her feet after just parting from her partner. It had one large room that doubled as a living room come bedroom which she used through the use of a bed settee, a smaller room which she used as the nursery and then the usual bathroom and small kitchen.
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha
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Re：From out of the mouths of babes Date Posted：08-11-2015 02:04Copy HTML Excellent, Tony, I really enjoyed the mystery behind this one,
well worked out and told with just enough conviction that one has to find out what had happened, thanks, Zy  Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Druid_girl
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Re：From out of the mouths of babes Date Posted：08-11-2015 06:41Copy HTML Things like this could really happen, that's what makes it so scary. I really enjoyed the story, Tony. Thanks for sharing it.
Maria "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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potleek
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Re：From out of the mouths of babes Date Posted：08-11-2015 07:47Copy HTML Zy I thought you might have realised where this story might have been going to some extent.
To repeat the same action several times I thought it kind of gave the game away. But then I gave just enough information as to wonder who, what and why the baby was taken out of the cot. I do thank you for the very kind comment...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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potleek
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Re：From out of the mouths of babes Date Posted：08-11-2015 07:49Copy HTML Maria thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Yes in a spooky kind of way perhaps something like this could become a reality. For there is more in this world that we don't know about...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha
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Re：From out of the mouths of babes Date Posted：08-11-2015 11:03Copy HTML That's how good you are at story-telling, Tony, I had an inkling, but was preoccupied with why
only when the power was gone....I'd missed the ending until...the end,  really clever writing, ZyOpposites exist by virtue of each other
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