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Druid_girl
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Date Posted:15-11-2014 01:40Copy HTML


Does it seem gothic to you
When day and night looks ethereal
No longer sun
Chilled to the bone
You stand back and wonder
Has the world ended for you
Some think it's an illusion
To feel disillusioned
With life in general
But what happens here
The weather appears temperamental
And you are caught in a storm
Don't let the façade fool you
It is the usual thing
That's happening
When winter comes
Covering the terrain
With gauzy breath
And you look upon it with disbelief
Although brief
The four seasons has to show off their array
So you can say, ah, it is over,
Now for the change.
Maria

"Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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Re:Gothic

Date Posted:15-11-2014 02:11Copy HTML


You always manage to make winter seem magical Maria, though with this one you have made some valid points..it can look quite gothic, quite beautiful even, but living through it can be a trial.

Stunning picture as usual  and a lovely poem.

Vicki x

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don't knock on deaths door.. just ring the bell and run like hell!!
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Re:Gothic

Date Posted:15-11-2014 10:27Copy HTML

Thank you Vicki for your compliment and kind words and for the accolades. I am so pleased you liked my write, for what you read is what I saw in the picture.

Mariaxx
"Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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