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Zydha
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Date Posted：28-08-2014 09:24Copy HTML
Sitting in my garden I thought I’d look inside But I found that part of me Had gone somewhere to hide. Where oh where is the rest of me The middle is not there to see. Does this mean it’s missing Or perhaps just gone from view Won’t you take my mirror To see what it does to you.
Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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potleek
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Re：Hide & Seek (kiddies forum) Date Posted：29-08-2014 09:27Copy HTML Zy I saw that picture the other day only in passing, never took a good look at it.
But now looking at it closer, a nice piece of photography, on reflection it's a good piece of photography (pun intended)...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha
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Re：Hide & Seek (kiddies forum) Date Posted：29-08-2014 02:44Copy HTML When I saw the picture, Tony, the first thing that hit me was the perfect positioning
of the mirror, even the lawn edge and shadowed shrubbery are superbly lined up... the second thing to hit me was, would a child notice it, or be left in wonder, lol that and the perplexed expression on the girls face inspired an 'instant', Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Deezee43
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Re：Hide & Seek (kiddies forum) Date Posted：29-08-2014 09:30Copy HTML Hi Les,
She wouldn't have much fun in a ZEN garden ~ no inner self to talk with haha David Could do with a glass of rosé!
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Zydha
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Re：Hide & Seek (kiddies forum) Date Posted：03-09-2014 05:18Copy HTML hahaha...one can always 'see through' your sense of humour, David,
 very funny, but what did you think of my poem for kiddies? Les x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Re：Hide & Seek (kiddies forum) Date Posted：22-05-2015 01:39Copy HTML I've just logged in for a quick read while I have some peace and quiet, Zy - and I'm glad I did! What a fabulous write to come in to!
This is a game I used to play a lot with the little ones. Try as they might, they couldn't find me. I used to borrow Harry Potter's invisibility cloak. Stand tall in the face of adversity
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Re：Hide & Seek (kiddies forum) Date Posted：22-05-2015 04:19Copy HTML Good job Zy. Well done and the art was a good choice. It would leave a child In total wonderment. Enjoyed the read. Your muse did an excellent job.
Mariaxx "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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Zydha
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Re：Hide & Seek (kiddies forum) Date Posted：03-07-2015 10:59Copy HTML Many thanks, Lynn and Maria, as you've probably gathered, I just loved that picture,
sometimes a poem seems to write itself, this is one o f those times, glad you both enjoyed, Zy x x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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