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Zydha
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Date Posted:14-08-2014 09:57Copy HTML


I see pictures in the raindrops
but they don't frighten me
sometimes I simply see a face
as pretty as can be.

Every time I look at them
they always look right back again.

Next time it rains quite heavily
I'll say "Hello" if she appears
then she may smile if I do too
from within those raindrop tears.

 

© Zydha Hart 2014

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Re:Raindrop Tears

Date Posted:14-08-2014 10:11Copy HTML

Sorry, forgot to say that this was a Kiddy write and I can't edit the title

(I don't think...but will try from here) Zy
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Re:Raindrop Tears

Date Posted:15-08-2014 07:27Copy HTML

 Hi Zy, this is a cute one, t'will make a little smile...good share.

Mariaxx
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Re:Raindrop Tears

Date Posted:15-08-2014 01:20Copy HTML

Thanks, Maria, but I hope you left a word out ... "t'will make a little smile"
Maybe a little 'one' for instance? smiley22 lol, though a little smile is better than none.

I was just visiting other forums and checking picture files (and generally noting figures)
and this piccie inspired the muse for a Kiddie 'instant, here is not so active with kids poetry,
yet, the 'Guest' viewings/readings are amazing figures, most now over the hundred mark, Zy x
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