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potleek
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Date Posted:08-04-2019 05:50Copy HTML

In a way it’s an everyday normal kind of town, which I suppose wouldn’t really be worth a second look, if it wasn’t for the military installation about ten miles out of town. Not that it made much difference to most of us for it was one of those kinds of establishments where you weren’t allowed to go near.


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Zydha Share to: Facebook Twitter MSN linkedin google yahoo #1
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Re:Strangers Amongst Us

Date Posted:10-04-2019 11:05Copy HTML

 WOW!!! and WOW again!!! You are so good at short stories.

I read this soon after you posted it, Tony, but didn't reach the ending because of interuption,

but this is truely super, suspense (ful) and so dark I couldn't wait to get back to it.....


You kept the tension flowing until the last moment, I thought it might have been but never guessed exactly, Zy

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Date Posted:11-04-2019 06:18Copy HTML

Zy thank you for taking the time to read this, tried to keep the suspense going just a little without prolonging it too much. But one can never tell what is on the other side when called...Tony (potleek)
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