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Zydha
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Date Posted:18-07-2015 07:33Copy HTML



Sweet will o' the wisp
of summer's season,
whilest eyes blink surprise
what tricks you play
darting from frame to frame
playing your game.

Have you some plan
to confuse man
as he welcomes
the summer sprite
only to observe
you rush into night.

Filtering summer's haze
are wasted days
when glory is yours
yet, you depart
like a dimented dart
in your bewildering ways.


(c) Zydha Hart 2012

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Re:The Summer Sprite (Sunday Repost)

Date Posted:19-07-2015 12:49Copy HTML

This 'should be' titled 'Summer Will o' The Wisp'

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Re:The Summer Sprite (Sunday Repost)

Date Posted:19-07-2015 02:25Copy HTML

well done Les - seasons seem to 'dart' off quicker and quicker as i age - seems like i'm speeding toward something

enjoyed this poem Les greatly

best always,
m
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Re:The Summer Sprite (Sunday Repost)

Date Posted:19-07-2015 01:42Copy HTML

Thanks, Mikhail, I remember my Mum saying to me 'The time and the years fly by as you get older"
since she died aged 49 she never got to full speed,
but 23 years beyond her early age, I think I am...it's no sooner summer than it is over.

Yes, one has to wonder what lies ahead, Mikhail, my curiosity over rides any apprehension, lol, Les


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Re:The Summer Sprite (Sunday Repost)

Date Posted:19-07-2015 05:29Copy HTML

Hi Zy, I have been having problems doing my replies...I don't know what it is, I hope it's my server and not my computer. :(

I liked your poem, light and airy, just like a day in the sun...well done, I enjoyed the read.

Mariaxx
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Re:The Summer Sprite (Sunday Repost)

Date Posted:21-07-2015 07:27Copy HTML

Hiya, Maria, sorry to hear you are having problems posting....

I wonder if the 'stormy' weather parts of America is having could be causing atmospheric interference,
hope it is soon over as we are missing you. All the more with some on hols...etc.

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed, Zy x
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