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Zydha
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Date Posted：20-09-2020 12:59Copy HTML Sandy had a habit of writing at night, long after the world around her had gone to sleep.
She wrote mostly for pleasure, sometimes as a form of escapism from the days hectic flurry of activity and her mind would go on adventurous trips perhaps high into a painted sky or just sometimes, she would find herself in a darker place of mind..
(c) Zydha Hart 2018 .... 1081 words Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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sachasuzanne27
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：20-09-2020 09:48Copy HTML oh I like this mum, I wont let out the point of the story but I do like what the message carries, I wasnt sure where I was going whilst reading this, many possible outcomes but love how that went, very descriptive imagery x
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potleek
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：21-09-2020 07:38Copy HTML Zy an interesting thought, should we that write be more careful of where we put things in our stories.
Nah! does it matter. Cannot remember where I put things half the time any way.
But I do like the twist in your story...Tony (potleek)
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Zydha
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：21-09-2020 09:25Copy HTML To be honest Tony, I just recognised this one in my story files of a while ago.... it gave me the opportunity to rewrite the closure with some meaning for the future. I will have a try at something fresh, Tony, though my story file really is endless, thanks for reading, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Zydha
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：21-09-2020 09:30Copy HTML Thanks, Sacha, as I said to Tony, this was a little bit of a rewrite (especially the ending) so I'm glad I didn't give too much away, it;s good to keep the secret a little bit, Mum x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Deezee43
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：21-09-2020 09:59Copy HTML Hi Les, A very interesting write. Most of those asked to put something in a time capsule would select physical objects; keepsakes or items that were important to them at the time, perhaps newspaper cuttings relating current events, photos and the like. I have to admire the contents of your time capsule ~ a valuable lesson learnt about life's choices to pass on to whom-so-ever opened your capsule. Dx Could do with a glass of rosé!
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Zydha
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：22-09-2020 10:57Copy HTML Maybe I am a bit more introspective than some, David, but what is sentimental or significant in my life to me is exactly that....relevant to me and my life's happenings.....so, ..... I would prefer to leave something to be learned by, perhaps of use even for avoidence of repetition. But you got that in the end, lol, thanks for reading, Les x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Deezee43
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：22-09-2020 11:10Copy HTML So, Les, are you saying in a roundabout way, that I got it right haha ??? Dx Could do with a glass of rosé!
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Zydha
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Re：Tony's Challenge Compartmentalised for The Future Date Posted：23-09-2020 11:08Copy HTML in a roundabout way??? mmnnn...... When did you and I see eye to eye, David, hahaha....but you're close, Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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