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| Title: Tony's Challenge: Opening time | |
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potleek
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Date Posted：23-09-2020 11:07Copy HTML Opening time
Placed in a plastic tub for fear of been rotten To be opened at a time when near forgotten Time stamped and put away Only to be opened some distant day
All manner of things from present times Stories and poems, some that rhymed Photographs of present days Just to show if things have change in any ways
But fixed inside firmly on the lid So out of view it would not have slid A thing of today in common use Refreshing and not used for abuse
For as I said fixed firmly inside of the lid I tell you this, I do not kid Perhaps it may make some people think A tea bag, so on me they could have a drink
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Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha
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Re：Tony's Challenge: Opening time Date Posted：24-09-2020 09:10Copy HTML Great play with words, Tony, this is really fun, how wonderful if this was 'the true flavour' of all that had gone before, excellent rhyming, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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sachasuzanne27
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Re：Tony's Challenge: Opening time Date Posted：24-09-2020 09:26Copy HTML light hearted happy read Tony, love the idea of giving them a drink on you, 'thoughtful' :) |
Deezee43
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Re：Tony's Challenge: Opening time Date Posted：04-10-2020 03:00Copy HTML Great idea Tony, let's hope there's some water still around when they open it, whenever that might be! David Could do with a glass of rosé!
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