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potleek
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Date Posted:21-09-2020 07:42Copy HTML


Time Capsule

 

Placed in a tin, then buried underground

For the duration should be safe and sound

Things that once where treasures, well kind of

Ornament made from a rubber mould

Once treasured more than gold

Then a bag of marbles from delicate skill

To lose any of them I’d rather kill

A tram ticket from a day out

Will always be remembered without any doubt

A photograph the likeness of me

So the finder will be able to see

So all these treasures will remember of days gone by

But now I give a heartfelt sigh

As time has passed I’ve moved many times

Now in my autumn of years

Cannot remember where buried

This brings about tears

But one never knows perhaps it will be found

Where it is safely buried, deep in the ground

 

 

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Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
Zydha Share to: Facebook Twitter MSN linkedin google yahoo #1
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Re:Tony's Challenge: Time Capsule

Date Posted:21-09-2020 09:42Copy HTML


How lovely, Tony, what sentiment is all about...to wonder who would find it...

and what it would mean to them.

We all have such special treasures, but what would be made of them by strangers...

it makes for such interesting thoughts and wonderings, Zy


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Re:Tony's Challenge: Time Capsule

Date Posted:22-09-2020 12:06Copy HTML

oh that is great Tony, I like all the sentiment you have included but love the little touch where, now in your autumn years you cant now remember where you put it lol (the fear of many of us putting something by for safe keeping and hoping we remember the 'safe' location) - cute sacha :)
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