Title: Tony's Challenge: Time Capsule | |
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potleek | |
Date Posted:21-09-2020 07:42Copy HTML Time Capsule
Placed in a tin, then buried underground For the duration should be safe and sound Things that once where treasures, well kind of Ornament made from a rubber mould Once treasured more than gold Then a bag of marbles from delicate skill To lose any of them I’d rather kill A tram ticket from a day out Will always be remembered without any doubt A photograph the likeness of me So the finder will be able to see So all these treasures will remember of days gone by But now I give a heartfelt sigh As time has passed I’ve moved many times Now in my autumn of years Cannot remember where buried This brings about tears But one never knows perhaps it will be found Where it is safely buried, deep in the ground
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Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha | Share to: #1 |
Re:Tony's Challenge: Time Capsule Date Posted:21-09-2020 09:42Copy HTML How lovely, Tony, what sentiment is all about...to wonder who would find it... and what it would mean to them. We all have such special treasures, but what would be made of them by strangers... it makes for such interesting thoughts and wonderings, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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sachasuzanne27 | Share to: #2 |
Re:Tony's Challenge: Time Capsule Date Posted:22-09-2020 12:06Copy HTML oh that is great Tony, I like all the sentiment you have included but love the little touch where, now in your autumn years you cant now remember where you put it lol (the fear of many of us putting something by for safe keeping and hoping we remember the 'safe' location) - cute
sacha :)
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