Title: Tonys Challenge ; Tin of Time | |
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Zydha | |
Date Posted:21-09-2020 10:38Copy HTML Tin of Time
It’s just an emptied biscuit tin With space for… memories, So, I’ll have a look around Hey, what is all of this I’ve found!!! Don’t take your pick of one of these. We have explosives, just for starters Then knives to make a butcher blush, Nails and sharply broken glass With detonating tools so crass Don’t open this capsule in a rush! I hope who finds this… tin of time Keeps it closed on so much evil crime.
© Zydha Hart 2020 Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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potleek | Share to: #1 |
Re:Tonys Challenge ; Tin of Time Date Posted:22-09-2020 07:50Copy HTML Zy sadly there are still too many of these type of tins left around, they banned certain types of missiles but neglected to add land mines to any list which causes untold damage to people.
Not my kind of thing to put in a time capsule...Tony (potleek)
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Zydha | Share to: #2 |
Re:Tonys Challenge ; Tin of Time Date Posted:23-09-2020 10:58Copy HTML You speak of a time of conflict, Tony, a time when man killed man under the guise of war... this would have to be a little more explicit in detail, about the times when people/children and all innocents suffered in the name of religious fanatacism or by simply being in the wrong place at the wrong time. I pray God that a lesson is learned at some point and we can be seen to have had something 'worthwhile' to pass on , Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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sachasuzanne27 | Share to: #3 |
Re:Tonys Challenge ; Tin of Time Date Posted:24-09-2020 09:39Copy HTML not many of us have a romantic view of our current world clearly hahaha - dark, but very good! I like the tin just having room for memories, that could be infinite :) x
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Zydha | Share to: #4 |
Re:Tonys Challenge ; Tin of Time Date Posted:04-10-2020 02:44Copy HTML Yes, Sacha, memories take up no space at all, but can give an overall view of what s gone by, there's little I'd want to pass on to others beyond personal experiences. It's been a strange time of tragedy and darker happenings, thanks for reading, Mum x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Deezee43 | Share to: #5 |
Re:Tonys Challenge ; Tin of Time Date Posted:04-10-2020 02:57Copy HTML Yes, Les, wouldn't it be wonderful to be able to pass on one's memories? I've often thought along those lines, especially when I see myself as others must, a grey haired (?) old man, generally looking a bit nondescript, a bit vague, shabby even. If only those people could experience the wonder of my memories, of people, sights I've seen, things I've done during my long years, places I've been to all over the world. Just an empty tin for memories Les, you're right, don't open it for all the other stuff! An interesting approach to Tony's challenge, Dx Could do with a glass of rosé!
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Zydha | Share to: #6 |
Re:Tonys Challenge ; Tin of Time Date Posted:04-10-2020 03:07Copy HTML Exactly my meaning, David, the good things don't need to take up space, and could be priceless in the art of recall. What value love and friendship, thanks, Les Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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