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Date Posted:08-05-2009 01:27Copy HTML A New Day
darkness covers the landscape and all that one can see are the shadows that are cast by the light of the moon one can see the stars that fill the night sky if you look to the east you might begin to see the faintest hint of crimson red the colour of blood outlining the horizon all is still silence reign is almost over the darkness begins to fade as the red hues play and dance a rainbow of reds and pinks are splashed across the sky as they announce the dawning of the new day with hope of promise for the ones who are awake and for those who still lay in deep slumber under their covers in the land of dreams little critters begin their day and the birds chirp their songs in a celebration as a new day has begun for all who are living in this moment. © Cara May 2009 |
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Cara_inSpirit | Share to: #1 |
Re:A New Day Date Posted:08-05-2009 01:30Copy HTML A New Day
darkness covers the landscape and all that one can see are the shadows that are cast by the light of the moon and the stars that fill the night sky if you look to the east you might begin to see the faintest hint of crimson red the colour of blood outlining the horizon all is still Silence's reign is almost over the darkness begins to fade as the red hues play and dance a rainbow reds and pinks are splashed across the sky as they announce the dawning of the new day with hope of promise for the ones who are awake and for those who still lay in deep slumber under their covers in the land of dreams little critters begin their day and the birds chirp their songs in a celebration as a new day has begun for all who are living in this moment. © Cara May 2009 |
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anemone4me2 | Share to: #2 |
Re:A New Day Date Posted:08-05-2009 07:39Copy HTML Love the thoughts behind this Cara, I am always grateful for a new day...
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Poetess312 | Share to: #3 |
Re:A New Day Date Posted:12-09-2011 03:18Copy HTML I'm just having a quick read through Collectives while I can Cara, as I have guests coming for dinner tonight -
and all I can say is damn! I wish I'd wrote this one! You've captured the dawning of a new day perfectly here! I prefer the revised version, though, as I think it flows much better. Powerful imagery too - and I love the use of colours here. (Er... can you give out reccies in Collectives? ). Visit me at:
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