Title: Birthday Treats (Lynn's Challenge) | |
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Zydha | |
Date Posted:05-06-2015 04:02Copy HTML She was everything every girl ever wanted to be, successful and rich, living in a beachfront hut with smaller proportions than one would expect, but she lived alone, unknown, to her neighbours; She flew solo, the beauty of the bay, spent her hours by herself, every single day except for her birthday, then was her delight she would throw a party, lasting all the night. Music, candles, vans with booze guests were many, but one she’d loose When all went home to along the way Except the last, she’d persuade to stay. Romance flared and her nostrils too To late - he remembered, what to do, He’d thought to woo then make his wife But, her teeth bit deep, as he gave his life. Noone ever knew, how old she really was But sensed the local young men fed her lifelong cause, So when the invitations come, everybody knows Go, but don’t be last to leave, when her lifeline, grows; © Zy 2015 Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Miss_Bubble | Share to: #1 |
Re:Birthday Treats (Lynn's Challenge) Date Posted:06-06-2015 12:47Copy HTML I seem to have been saying this a lot lately, Zy, but...
I'm glad I didn't read this one before bed! A dark write indeed! This would be perfect for Halloween! Stand tall in the face of adversity
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Zydha | Share to: #2 |
Re:Birthday Treats (Lynn's Challenge) Date Posted:06-06-2015 10:11Copy HTML ah hah, I didn't want it to be too gory, Lynn, not in our ethereal and fairy section,
but you set the yardstick, lol, just kept to the theme, Zy x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Miss_Bubble | Share to: #3 |
Re:Birthday Treats (Lynn's Challenge) Date Posted:06-06-2015 10:26Copy HTML So I did, Zy, so I did...
Stand tall in the face of adversity
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