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Miss_Bubble | |
Date Posted:25-06-2019 06:47Copy HTML Day and night Reflecting in dreams, Unseen by hands Sculpting trees In deepest ~ Green ~ Deepest in Trees, sculpting Hands by unseen Dreams in reflecting Night and day. Stand tall in the face of adversity
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Zydha | Share to: #1 |
Re:Day and Night (Palindrome) Date Posted:25-06-2019 01:27Copy HTML Bravo, Lynn, nicely executed, I have only done this format twice before I ran out of patience, lol, so well done, you, and such a lovely topic, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Miss_Bubble | Share to: #2 |
Re:Day and Night (Palindrome) Date Posted:27-06-2019 10:43Copy HTML Thanks Zy. I’m glad you enjoyed! I’ve written a few palindromes lately, so I guess they must be well within my comfort zone now. The others are all autumnal writes, though, so I’m keeping them for September. I’ve been giving my brain a workout lately, trying different poetic formats. I’ll have a look at Shadow Poetry later, just to see which format I can try next (and I still need to write another etheree, as I haven’t got around to it yet!). Stand tall in the face of adversity
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potleek | Share to: #3 |
Re:Day and Night (Palindrome) Date Posted:27-06-2019 01:27Copy HTML Lynn I read this when you first posted but for some strange reason didn't leave a comment.
Once I get behind with commenting I seem to be all over the place.
Now I'm familiar with the format, understand it and all that, but not brave or you might say clever enough to attempt one for it to make sense.
So I applaud you for the effort that goes into this format...Tony (potleek)
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sachasuzanne27 | Share to: #4 |
Re:Day and Night (Palindrome) Date Posted:27-06-2019 08:11Copy HTML Lynn, this is clever and very enjoyable :)
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Miss_Bubble | Share to: #5 |
Re:Day and Night (Palindrome) Date Posted:28-06-2019 04:54Copy HTML You really should have a go, Tony. It’s a fascinating format! It’s hard at first but, once you get the hang of it, it’s fun! To be honest, I hadn’t actually intended to write a palindrome. I just wrote a short verse and thought “Hey! This reads well backwards too!” All I needed was the centre word and hey presto! As I said to Zy, palindromes must be well within my comfort zone now. Glad you enjoyed! Stand tall in the face of adversity
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Miss_Bubble | Share to: #6 |
Re:Day and Night (Palindrome) Date Posted:28-06-2019 04:59Copy HTML Glad you enjoyed this one, thanks Sacha! I love writing palindromes, so I may have a go at writing some more when I have time. :) Stand tall in the face of adversity
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