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Miss_Bubble
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Date Posted:25-06-2019 06:47Copy HTML

Day and night 

Reflecting in dreams,

Unseen by hands

Sculpting trees

In deepest 

~ Green ~

Deepest in

Trees, sculpting 

Hands by unseen

Dreams in reflecting 

Night and day.

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Zydha Share to: Facebook Twitter MSN linkedin google yahoo #1
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Re:Day and Night (Palindrome)

Date Posted:25-06-2019 01:27Copy HTML

 Bravo, Lynn, nicely executed, I have only done this format twice

before I ran out of patience, lol, so well done, you, and such a lovely topic, Zy

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Re:Day and Night (Palindrome)

Date Posted:27-06-2019 10:43Copy HTML

Thanks Zy. I’m glad you enjoyed!

I’ve written a few palindromes lately, so I guess they must be well within my comfort zone now. The others are all autumnal writes, though, so I’m keeping them for September.


I’ve been giving my brain a workout lately, trying different poetic formats. I’ll have a look at Shadow Poetry later, just to see which format I can try next (and I still need to write another etheree, as I haven’t got around to it yet!).

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Re:Day and Night (Palindrome)

Date Posted:27-06-2019 01:27Copy HTML

Lynn I read this when you first posted but for some strange reason didn't leave a comment. Once I get behind with commenting I seem to be all over the place. Now I'm familiar with the format, understand it and all that, but not brave or you might say clever enough to attempt one for it to make sense. So I applaud you for the effort that goes into this format...Tony (potleek)
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Re:Day and Night (Palindrome)

Date Posted:27-06-2019 08:11Copy HTML

Lynn, this is clever and very enjoyable :)
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Re:Day and Night (Palindrome)

Date Posted:28-06-2019 04:54Copy HTML

You really should have a go, Tony. It’s a fascinating format! 

It’s hard at first but, once you get the hang of it, it’s fun!

To be honest, I hadn’t actually intended to write a palindrome. I just wrote a short verse and thought “Hey! This reads well backwards too!” All I needed was the centre word and hey presto!

As I said to Zy, palindromes must be well within my comfort zone now.

Glad you enjoyed!

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Re:Day and Night (Palindrome)

Date Posted:28-06-2019 04:59Copy HTML

Glad you enjoyed this one, thanks Sacha!

I love writing palindromes, so I may have a go at writing some more when I have time. :)

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