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Zydha
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Date Posted:13-08-2020 02:41Copy HTML



Like a skeletoned leaf

Friendship has a fragility.

Though often discarded

By the weathering storms,

It may once again grow

To endure life's wear and tear.

Regard a leaf upon a tree,

Choose a time of lushness

For it cannot last forever,

Yet it may be renewed

Again and again, once

Each superficial layer

Has been devoured 

By, the corrosion of living. 

 

 

(c) ZYDHA HART 2005


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Re:Decaying Leaf of Life (ancient repost)

Date Posted:25-08-2020 03:00Copy HTML

Hi Les,


I sense nostalgic thoughts in this piece, friendships made, delayed, deleted, repeated.

Life and location surely try the sincerity of friendships, and with the best will in the world, it requires a determination to maintain them across both time and distance.

I suspect it may have been easier in times gone by, when we didn't travel so far from our roots, to keep in touch with those we knew when young and with whom we matured and shared the highs and lows of life, always being within a stone's throw or a short bus ride from each other.

Now the world seem smaller, friendships are a bit harder to maintain.

I love "the skeleton of a leaf that has been devoured by the corrosion of living", what a clever, poetic, analogy.


Dx

Could do with a glass of rosé!
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Re:Decaying Leaf of Life (ancient repost)

Date Posted:27-08-2020 03:17Copy HTML


Hy, and yes, I can see why I married you all those years ago, David...(to some degree...)

we often tend to see with similar vision. Life is given in layers, renewing with regularity


I'm glad you liked that analogy, David, it's one I did have to think over quite a lot, thanks, Les x


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