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potleek
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Date Posted：22-10-2015 08:44Copy HTML
In My Dreams Pink elephants that fly Amongst candy clouds in the sky Perhaps all isn’t what it seems But that’s what I see in my dreams Toffee apples on trees in June Birds that whistle a popular tune Biscuits filled with different creams That’s what I see in my dreams Fish that blow soapy bubbles They do it without any troubles Days where the sun always beams That’s what I see in my dreams At night I can see so far I see angles sitting on a distant star So if all is not what it seems That’s what I see in my dreams Gently close both your eyes Let me know what you see Together we will be so free So you can join in my dreams with me.
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha
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Re：In My Dreams Date Posted：22-10-2015 10:24Copy HTML Oh, what a lovely addition to our Kiddies Poems, but please, may I take you up on that last line, Tony, please, lol I have seldom been blessed with such peaceful sleep, nightmares, yes, but not dreams like these; even as a child! Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Druid_girl
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Re：In My Dreams Date Posted：23-10-2015 02:13Copy HTML Loved this, you rhymed the whole way through. I can't help but admire you and your poetry. I noticed that it was written for children, I am guilty of not participating. I will have to write something when inspired, and if and when I do, I hope I can rhyme as well as you Tony.
Mariaxx "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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Deezee43
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Re：In My Dreams Date Posted：23-10-2015 02:20Copy HTML Hi Tony,
this is very well put together, I have to admit, I get through the challenge and sometimes venture into the Main Page and very occasionally visit The Gallery (which I highly recommend, Poets) but seldom visit here, must do more, David Could do with a glass of rosé!
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