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Zydha
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Date Posted:02-06-2015 11:42Copy HTML


mikhail44
junie - pale blue gaze - flaxen ringlets

 

julie junie - entered sanctimonious layer as she sashay - in harmony - down the stair - with - - self

self met julie when - when through lace toile she loved - satin gloves - hovering above kingdom’s grace

 

why - why did they meet - why did she not fly - before - fly by feet by seat by beat - to meet - self

she’ll be next to enter - heaven - the next - to the number seven - the next - to find - -  her home

she moaned a time before - she stoked and so much more - so much more - left north far north of true love’s amour

but so close

 

close to the cold - immersed in ice - drenched in crystal’s secret satin soft-ness - slid so close to Charlie’s dreams -
so so close to riding that pleasing chestnut Horse

 

oh sweet jesus - oh sweet god - oh all i’ve left - so it cost me some of my bod - what did i lose - what was there to choose -
a little for some crank - oh shite there’s no choice - my voice - my voice

wasn’t it?

 

oh to ease off the ache - i had to fake a few - it wasn’t long - i was all strong - they weren’t nothin - fluffin – nuthin

 

it didn’t hurt - it didn’t take long - they were the losers - and - and - i - was - the strong - all along

 

remember what mum said - it don’t matter none - yer looks‘ll get ya what ya need - girl - girl

she never hurt - so i learned - i wasn’t gonna hurt either - ha

yeah - it cost me - a little jail time - huh - so - time in pantomime - time to rest - waitin to be blessed - ha – fools

 

oh daak times - mmmmm yah - there was - but - the buzz - drew me out of it - kept me waaaaaaarm - alllllllll night - alllllllll tight -
filled with love

it was love wasn’t it

oh - fool - it was

 

julie junie - entered sanctimonious layer as she sashay - in harmony - down the stair - with - - - self

self met julie when - when through lace toile she loved - satin gloves - hovering above kingdom’s grace

why - why did they meet - why did she not fly - before - fly by feet by seat by beat - to meet - self

she’ll be next to enter - - heaven - the next - to the number seven - the next - to find - - -  home

warm

 

best,

m

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Re:Junie ..... By .....Mikhail

Date Posted:02-06-2015 11:52Copy HTML

Mikhail, I hope this is ok for you, but the print when lifted from the email

literally closed up as one and it was difficult to guess the layout and pauses,

when the lines are exceptionally long, Aimoo doesn't play friendly. It often distorts.

I even took it to Word, but the font remained closed up, shall read it tomorrow though, night, Les

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