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Date Posted:26-05-2014 11:07Copy HTML Lost in a maze,
Lost in a dream Where nothing is ever Quite what it seems. Lost deep in thought, Lost in a world, A nightmare reality Where darkness has unfurled. Lost in a maze, Lost deep inside, With nowhere to run And nowhere to hide. She's lost in a maze, Trapped and alone. Will she ever Find her way home? Visit me at:
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potleek | Share to: #1 |
Re:Lost Date Posted:27-05-2014 08:49Copy HTML Lynn once again the mind can conjure up all kind of things.
Dreams are funny things, if only we could make sense of them. But they say they all make sense...I know some of mine don't...Tony (potleek)
Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
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Zydha | Share to: #2 |
Re:Lost Date Posted:28-05-2014 02:22Copy HTML This piece really spoke to me, Lynn, maybe just because of where I am at the moment,
but somehow, sometimes, it is not always easy to separate dreams and reality... and one can feel quite lost and alone within their own thoughts, asleep or awake, I really liked (and felt) this write, Zy x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Druid_girl | Share to: #3 |
Re:Lost Date Posted:28-05-2014 10:15Copy HTML I enjoyed the read Lynn...I am sorry I haven't been in more often or sooner, but trying to focus without corrective lenses and having problems reading and sitting for a long time poses a problem...
I have to say you did this a marvelous way, great share of thought. I share in your sentiments and with the others. Maria "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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