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Zydha
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Date Posted:27-04-2015 10:15Copy HTML


FANTASY

I poked a hole in the night-time sky
as all the cars went rushing by,
all I wished for, was to fly
beyond the queues of life nearby.

I wished for quiet and for peace
where all earthly sounds will cease
and darkened shadows should decrease
as self unfurls to find release.

Tomorrow's sun came shining through,
a sky of darkness glowed anew,
this is my fantasy come true
and the world wondered, who withdrew.


(c) ZYDHA HART 2002

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Re:My Fantasy

Date Posted:27-04-2015 11:00Copy HTML

Wow, this is ethereal. Well done, tis what I dream of also. Love of fantasy. Don't think I've ever read this one. Well done, Zy!

Mariaxx
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Re:My Fantasy

Date Posted:28-04-2015 09:50Copy HTML

A little moment of escapism, Maria, sometimes, one wonders who would really notice,

many thank for such a lovely review, Zy x

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Re:My Fantasy

Date Posted:28-04-2015 10:39Copy HTML

Nicely done, Zy.

To find a moment of peace for the soul would be like a slice of Heaven

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