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foretfleur
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Date Posted:26-04-2015 06:01Copy HTML

Plat de mémoires


Je coupe les oignons, les rouges, je préfère leur goût
Ce sont ceux dont je me souviens, plus difficile a éplucher
Un coup de ciseaux et avec une ficelle non blanchie
Je tords autour des fines herbes croissantes.

Je veux créer un ragoût, je veux créer un souvenir,
Le mener à la vie, à exploser, le goût à imploser
Y mettre tous les bouquets et les saveurs de ma vie
Remuer, rouler, extraire le fumet si longtemps perdu puis recréer le casting
En faire un film de ma vie, le tout venant de mon potager

J’émince, je coupe en cube, je rajoute une nuance aux champignons sauvages, 
en une éclaboussure, J’ajoute un peu de ci, un peu de ca, 
un coup de bec, un peu de moi-même,
Le créer simple, le prendre, le secouer : qu’il soit exotique
Je fus un temps ton orchidée, rare, je poussais dans des endroits
Loin des curieux

J’éclabousse et m’empresse, j’entaille et casse net
Mon plat de mémoires, un morceau sur tes lèvres,
Je vais faire cuire et mariner avec amour et affection
Un plat venu de mes tripes, la saveur de mon cœur

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Re:Plat de mémoires

Date Posted:27-04-2015 02:20Copy HTML

I've had fun with this one, Emma, though not quite as bilingual as you are,

I have enough understanding of French to relish the meaning behind these words...

what a lovely thought, to savour and select the special memories from life's dishes

and keep as a platter close to one's heart, Zy x (I hope I've got it right)

Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Re:Plat de mémoires

Date Posted:27-04-2015 05:12Copy HTML

Sorry Emma, I am sure it was lovely, but I do not read French. So I am sorry if I do not give credit where credit is due.
Mariaxx
"Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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Re:Plat de mémoires

Date Posted:30-04-2015 06:10Copy HTML

 Thank you Maria, I do have the English version on here in the poetry forum which is why I posted this in my page as I know most people are not french speaking - I appreciate you taking the time to look and to comment - I write more and more in French these days which was my first language - a sign I must be getting old I think :-)

Thanks Zy, I like to think that our lives are shaped by experience and cooking is just such an experience, what we learn as children, to our children and grandchildren, it is like a rich tapestry.  I do not pretend to be a great cook, but my sons all love my cooking because I think I took the time when they were children to cook dishes, rather than serve up rubbish from cheap supermarkets

Emma x
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