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sachasuzanne27 | |
Date Posted:11-11-2018 10:02Copy HTML On St Valentine's Day, we express our love In the ring, Matadors challenge their power The Red Cross, helping nations globally Strawberry jam, completes a cream tea As Red Arrows, raise British pride A red light, makes us stop and think As do poppies, symbolising the sacrafice of those who died, for our freedom Sacha Gym? oh damn, thought you said Gin!
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potleek | Share to: #1 |
Re:RED Date Posted:12-11-2018 04:29Copy HTML Sacha I like the thought behind your poem with the colour red leading towards the poppy that has come to represent the fallen in all the conflicts of recent times.
But sadly I cannot condone the thought of your second line. Perhaps the colour of shoes that got Dorothy home, a more pleasant thought...Tony (potleek)
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Zydha | Share to: #2 |
Re:RED Date Posted:12-11-2018 08:01Copy HTML What a pleasure it was this morning to find you had contributed to our long running thread, Sacha, and I did like the colour connecting lines, culminating in that saddest of all... I disagree with Tony in as much as you have sprung from all extremes of life and emotion, whereas Dorothys shoes weren;t an issue nor even real life. Free verse gave you that scope, stick around, Babe, Zy x Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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potleek | Share to: #3 |
Re:RED Date Posted:12-11-2018 08:19Copy HTML Zy my thoughts towards senseless killing of animals for entertainment just doesn't rest with me.
In no way is it meant to take away from Sachas poetry, only my opinion of that piece of living truth.
Bull fighting as they call it goes along with all the other so called blood sports which are too many to mention here.
Yes it is nice to see Sacha continuing to post in the corner...Tony (potleek)
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sachasuzanne27 | Share to: #4 |
Re:RED Date Posted:12-11-2018 10:00Copy HTML Hi Mum and Tony Thank you for your appreciated replies. I am slow returning to this genre of expression so do forgive me. However, I will just add that I too abhore bull fighting but was using poetic licence as another one of my examples of real extremes of emotion the colour red can evoke :) From reading the contributions from the members of this site over the years, it is one of the gifts of poetry that we can state those ideas/thoughts, even when they are not our own. But always interesting how when one writes something, others perceive in ways the author may not have considered, but, isnt that the wonder/freedom of poetry Tony, their freedom lost all those years ago. Yet If things had turned out differently, we wouldnt have the freedom to write this way, possibly .......mmnnn Gym? oh damn, thought you said Gin!
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Deezee43 | Share to: #5 |
Re:RED Date Posted:12-11-2018 10:13Copy HTML Hi Sacha, It was lovely to see your post here, and may I join the others in welcoming you back to the corner. It's a very special day today, for so many reasons. Along with the relief and joy that accompany the end of such death and misery, it invokes thoughts of the bravery, the courage, the fear and the selflessness of man (and I mean mankind), which through whose sacrifice we are still free thinking and speaking English. In your poem I love the way you have highlighted these facets of human nature, Love, courage, compassion, a little comfort, pride, caution, self sacrifice and at times, paying the ultimate price. Well done, you. dad Could do with a glass of rosé!
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