Seascape

Title: Seascape
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Druid_girl
Rank：Diamond Member Score：2843 Posts：2843 From：USA Register：11-02-2014 01:37	Date Posted：16-05-2016 07:47Copy HTML Van Gogh Seascape at Saintes Maries de la Mer Wood Wall Art Did he see The beauty before him Did he feel Saline upon his cheeks Smell the splendor Of the sea Waves crashing upon shore Using imagery from what he saw Brush strokes raw Wild, beguiled him Beauty of the sea Happy memories. Maria "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
potleek	Share to: #1
Rank：Diamond Member Score：4849 Posts：4849 From：United Kingdom Register：07-01-2009 05:20	Re：Seascape Date Posted：16-05-2016 08:13Copy HTML Maria I like the painting and the words you've put with it. But read through what you've actually wrote and not what you think you've wrote, There may be a slight error unless I've read it wrong...Tony (potleek) Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
Druid_girl	Share to: #2
Rank：Diamond Member Score：2843 Posts：2843 From：USA Register：11-02-2014 01:37	Re：Seascape Date Posted：17-05-2016 06:16Copy HTML Grammatically...was it the "he" and not him? I changed it. You are my editor, you do read and see. I was told once, that one should be conscious of what one writes, it shows, doesn't it? Thanks for your feedback. I miss reading, I guess I have to be patient and stick around, might be surprised. Mariaxx "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
potleek	Share to: #3
Rank：Diamond Member Score：4849 Posts：4849 From：United Kingdom Register：07-01-2009 05:20	Re：Seascape Date Posted：24-05-2016 08:29Copy HTML Maria, all of us who write make that mistake of writing what we think we have wrote and quite often we don't see the mistake. That's why when editing our own pieces we have to sit back and read it as if is the first time of reading and even then we miss those little things, so don't worry you are not alone. Friends understand those little errors, heaven knows I make plenty of them...Tony (potleek) Time is the most precious thing we have, but we are the poorer if we can't spend a little time on a friend
Druid_girl	Share to: #4
Rank：Diamond Member Score：2843 Posts：2843 From：USA Register：11-02-2014 01:37	Re：Seascape Date Posted：25-05-2016 02:48Copy HTML Thanks Tony, being a writer, you understand the meaning of things. The English language is harder than one thinks. All the rules and regulations, when one comes from another land, hearing and speaking more than one language, it is hard to visualize when reading ones own thoughts down. Hope you are close to being done with your remodeling, I hate to come into an empty forum. It is ok once in a while, but when it goes on for a lengthy period, one gets lost, like being in an empty room. Peace and blessings, Maria "Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."