Like Tony, we are fascinated with the new style, the different methods of poetic writing, like him, I am not into pain, and have to admit I am lazy. Thanks Zy for making the corner an exciting one...you are a brave soul...I wish I had the gumption to do it, but am too lazy or tired...Well done, you!
Mariaxx

Zy I like the words, it wouldn't have mattered if the sylabel count was wrong (which it isn't).
But the thing is we don't know how much time we have. Tony (potleek)

As you know, Maria, I love the challenge in formats and this was a new one to me,

si I just had to have a try at it, but the good thing is, if it doesn't work, you don't post it,

thanks, Maria, Zy x

Thanks for reading, Tony, and exactly, we don't, hence the title....

but the one breath which solves the puzzle is the last one, as the last word says, Zy