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Date Posted:31-03-2015 11:26Copy HTML Where Angel's Stop and Cry Days are filled with sorrow, The dark ones walk at night, Another soul is lost, He has given up the fight. Light turns into darkness, The battle rages on, The war between flesh and spirit, Continues from dusk to dawn. Seraphim encircle the throne, Partitioning for mercy and grace, Angels carry out orders, Determined to win the race. Victory bells are ringing, Heaven's army wins a round, Shackles and chains fall to the floor, Still many are helplessly bound. Light will overcome darkness, It's only a matter of time, Trials turn into mountains, Jagged cliffs we all must climb. Press onward toward the finish line, Where mighty eagles fly, Be mindful of the places, Where angels stop and cry. Crystal tears of pain and joy, Fall upon the ground, Folded wings cast eerie shadows, There are angels all around. Feathers brush against the cheek, Angelic beings passing by, On their way to a secret place, Where angels stop and cry. Written by Storm 3/30/2015 |
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Druid_girl | Share to: #1 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:31-03-2015 02:32Copy HTML
Done with perfection Storm, I love this. You are a poetess! I am glad you shared this one with us. I hope you continue to share, you are a joy to read. Mariaxx
"Life without God is like an unsharpened pencil - it has no point."
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ShaKeira | Share to: #2 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:31-03-2015 06:26Copy HTML WOW!!! Yes, as Maria has said, you ARE a poet, Storm.
This writing about your walk and belief is very well executed. I used that picture one time for a poem about a child who is sad that she is always in trouble. I am glad you are here sharing your talent with us. Blessings from Corinne "Give thanks for unknown blessings already on their way."....Native American Saying
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Zydha | Share to: #3 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:31-03-2015 09:56Copy HTML I have read this twice now, Storm, and love how your title echoes
in many of these thought provoking lines, great wordsmithing.... we are indeed richer for your company within our forums, Storm, and I thank you for visiting our Gallery with such a picture and it's inspiration, Zy Opposites exist by virtue of each other
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Deezee43 | Share to: #4 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:31-03-2015 11:45Copy HTML Hi, Storm,
first let me echo the praise the others have given you, you are indeed, a wordsmith and we are all the richer to have you here with us to share and enjoy your work. Secondly, I too have read this more than once for it draws your reader into a place of contemplation, the picture, your title and your words amalgamate so well together, David Could do with a glass of rosé!
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Storm_TwoSpirits | Share to: #5 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:01-04-2015 10:41Copy HTML Aww, thank you, Maria. I'm glad that you liked this poem and I'm glad to be here. |
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Storm_TwoSpirits | Share to: #6 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:01-04-2015 10:42Copy HTML Thanks for the compliment, Corinne. Yes, I tend to write about what I feel and believe. Many of my poems are based on life experiences too. Thanks again! |
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Storm_TwoSpirits | Share to: #7 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:01-04-2015 10:44Copy HTML Zy, thank you so much for your kind words regarding this poem. I am very happy that you enjoyed reading it. I am richer for having met you all and being able to peek into the world of many fine poets. |
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Storm_TwoSpirits | Share to: #8 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:01-04-2015 10:47Copy HTML David, thank you so much for your kind words. I am very pleased you enjoyed reading this poem. |
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Miss_Bubble | Share to: #9 |
Re:Where Angel's Stop and Cry Date Posted:16-05-2015 07:54Copy HTML I think the others have said it all for me, Storm. This is fantastic!
Stand tall in the face of adversity
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